wow interesting but i liked it keep it up 5/5

awww that was sooo sad! but sweet. i loved it.

WOw that was so interesting and powerful. excellent job. xxx

great job once again

I love it. It's so full of emotion. Your very talented. Keep it up ♥

Good poem, but didn't really like the lines being long then getting shorter and shorter, that leads to less syllables per line and makes it a little un-even.

Best wishes,
Patrik

That is a very deeply emotional poem. It's very well done with good rhythme and imagery. Keep up the good work.