i can't pretend its o.k either i love the poem off to reading more

good poem

all your poems would make really good songs lol. good job!

Again, you did a great job. This really relates to me on a personal level, as I'm sure it does many others. You have a gift! so keep writing 5/5!

This relates to me too and the rythm of the poem flows like a river and woould make a brilliant song.
Keep it up!
Luv Scarlet