hey i said i'd get to reading all the poems eventualy nd here i am! wow this poem was so flowing nd natural it had a very hopefull message i definatly think u should enter this into a contest so more ppl can get a chance to read it its a wonderful poem...5/5

-.'.-erica-.'.-

nice message, great poem
~Freak~

I love the positve message in this poem , everything worked so well together . It flowed so nicely ...awesome job !
April`

wow, awesome, awesome rhyming great job!
p.s.could you check otu a few of mine if you get the chacne?

WOW! extremely creative and light-hearted but meaningful! wow! its really really good! u got my vote alright! hehe luv monique