First Kiss

by Kate   Jun 14, 2005


At first I kissed him softly.
Then harder it became.
There was so much passion there.
Just like a burning flame.

But then I had to leave.
My mom was calling from the car.
But as we drove away,
I could feel him from afar.

My stomach began to turn.
The butterflies were coming up.
So much excitement in the air.
The feeling gave me hiccups.

I could tell that it was love.
Right then and there I knew.
For life couldn't be better.
Everything felt so new.

I know I need to fix the last line of the third stanza but PLEASE vote and comment i would really appreciate it!

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  • 20 years ago

    by rene

    nice

  • 20 years ago

    by tiffany

    great job! i loved it! 5! return the favor!