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by Kate Jun 14, 2005 category : Love, romance / new love
At first I kissed him softly. Then harder it became. There was so much passion there. Just like a burning flame. But then I had to leave. My mom was calling from the car. But as we drove away, I could feel him from afar. My stomach began to turn. The butterflies were coming up. So much excitement in the air. The feeling gave me hiccups. I could tell that it was love. Right then and there I knew. For life couldn't be better. Everything felt so new.I know I need to fix the last line of the third stanza but PLEASE vote and comment i would really appreciate it!
by rene
nice
by tiffany
great job! i loved it! 5! return the favor!