great poem! very thoughful! very interesting! i like it-like it! 25/5 =)

i like this poem cuz it shows that you really loved the ice cream boy 5/5

very nice... original and touching

great write dont ya hate that when u like a guy and they dont know how ya feel!

thanks so much for r/c on my poem!

love always

Natalie

thats kool

I really like the begininning of this poem. keep it up

FANTASTIC! I really love this. Short, but oh so sweet. I love the first two lines; they are excellent. Awesome job. 5/5 forsure.

Tiffany.xox.

I love it how you can give away so much detail in your poems.
But it's still not a lot of writing.
It gives the reader a visual of the story you're telling.
5/5