Perfection in my eyes

by mkhoviyeun   Jun 15, 2005


All i ever wanted was to be part of your heart
and for us to be together-to never be apart
no one else in the world can even compare
you're perfect and so is this love we share
we have so much more than i ever thought we would
i love you more than i thought i could
i promise to give you all i have to give
i'll do anything for you as long as i live
in your eyes i see our present, your future and past
by the way you look at me i know we will last
i hope that one day you'll come to realize
how perfect you are when seen through my eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jay

    you speak my heart,
    but your rhymes are too repeat.
    your love is real,
    that's the way to be real.
    LOVED ur Poem,
    your got some going on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nina

    awsome poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    there is absolutely nothing in this poem that I haven't read 1000s of times before...The rhymes, the pictures...everything...

    The rhyming seems forced, and almost every single are clichès.

    did not like it..

    sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by Cut~Up~Angel

    Aww that poems really good. "how perfect you are when seen through my eyes " I love that line because it is sooo true that we see our loved ones as being perfect. Keep it up
    Love Kate x~X~x

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