This is my first attempt at writing a Quatern....I'm not at all impressed! I'd love to know what you think~Holly

I'm liking this a lot! the sort of poem I always try to write, but never quite succeed. Well done Holly.

ONE OF YOUR BEST, muh dear. I love it. 5/5

Quatern, hey girl, I have no idea what the rules are in writing this kind of poem, I have always just wrote simple things, I'm now learning new techniques....I loved the words, even if there were no format that you followed, it said so much. Could you tell me what the guidelines are for this and exactly what the definition is? I love to learn new things with writing. I will watch for a comment on one of my poems from you, maybe you could explain it there, and read a new poem of mine at the same time, (what a treat) hehehe thanks so much, love your work. Love ya, Becky

I am totally impressed! It is written wonderfully! Great job, HOLLY!

Good job, Holly. I loved it! 5/5

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Just wanted to send you a thank you for being such a wonderful addition to the site & for being so sweet to me....

Bless you
<3Heather M Craig.

Very good I dont think I could write something fixed like this you have done well keep it up!

take care

Holly Armer, I love your style. A traditional subject wrote in a beautiful way with a perfect start "Please Tread lightly upon my heart"

this part is my favourite" Holding the softest part of me
Please tread lightly upon my heart
For words can cut so easily
Ripping my perfect world apart"

I like the title too.

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

Cool! I will have to try one of these! I love trying new forms!

you worked the repeating line in very nicely.

Hi Ms. Holly, that is the best quatern I have ever read, in fact, its probably the first, too. Its beautiful, the words and how you express them, its truly an honor to read it. Love, Tim

I really like this, its written so well! "for the pieces break with such ease" wonderful Holly as ever!

Oh Wow!!! This was so truly breath taking, so beautiful, inspiring and awesome. I could read this time and time again and ejoy it more each time!
Kudos.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Again you have wowed me. I enjoy all your works. Keep inspiring us...

Again, I love the formed peotry as it is much more challenging than the average kind. Great job!