Great to see another post written by you. Truly a great job, enjoyed. hugs, love, Ann

That's really good. When I read it, it kind of made me think about the relationships that I had that were falling apart because of nothing. Keep up the awesome work, and expect to hear from me again. Good job!!

awesome work sir! just a beautiful write,......well done!

bert.

I agree with all...this poem is well written and expressed. I don't think I've ever read a poem like this. Excellent job!

This poem was definitely a winner for the contest. Very well written, I loved it. Great choice of words too! This is the first time I have had the pleasure of reading your work. Like father like daughter! Sunny must have been blessed with your talent to write. You two have a way with words and a creative way of expressing feelings. Take Care! Brooke~

I really like this one. Good job. =P

Congrats.... Fisherman... Truly well deserved with this one.... Hope you're doing good and God Bless you, always.

Hugs, Love, Ann

wow good poem and love the last line. really good write and good style of writing too. bet it was hard to come up with all the rhyming words but u never faultered once.

xxxLoUxxx

Well, Sir, this is truly an amazing write and I can understand why it won the contest, congratulations!!! I read your daughter Sunny all the time, I can see where she gets her talent from. Wonderful job and bless your heart..........

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

I adore your language, so strong. from the first line you get hooked into this amazing peice. The rhymes are absoloutly amazing, you should be really happy with this peice

Sammi xxx

I'd give it a four, since some of the rhythm of the lines was questionable. Pretty clever rhyming though.

Brilliant contrast of emotion and observation!

Cherish it forever.

WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

This was really well written. I especially like how you weer able to rhyme all the last words in each paragraph. That can be really hard to do if you want everything to flow nicely together. Great Job!! Check out some of mine if u get a chance.....I have written a couple where the end words in each paragraph rhyme as well.
Keep up the good work!

Hot poem good emotion and vocabulary

Weel done keep it up!!
sux27

Very nice poem, fisherman. I loved the rhyming scheme you used here and I loved the flow. Great work:)

Thats a pretty good poem... but it would be fantastic if the rhyming words were more recognized words that people knew what they meant.

5/5 love it

Im speechless this poem was amazing