hey:))
great poem

Awww . . . that was sooo great!!! I loved it!!! I can kinda relate to it in a way!!! Hey if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote cuz it would mean the would to me more than you know!!! Awesome poem though . . . 5/5 all the way!!!
*Lisa*

Nice work. Hope you don't mind an observation, the rhyming seems a bit forced. However, overall a good write, kepp up the writing.

Regards,

Steve

Again, great emotional depth is shown in your poems. i loved it!
ash

It is not bad! It's great. Beautifully written sweets. It's wonderful:) Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Aawww it's so sweet!!!!!

I like it. It's sweet.
JJx