not bad....i like it...yea i know is sad when people u love have to move...especially if that someone is the girl u love...it hurts... i know it does...u know i do....well this is a good poem...now wait 'till u c my new poem.......k bye homie...like i and other people always say..." PAIN IS LOVE" later homie...peace out...

ya i do what i can..........thast what i always say.....but this one wasnet better then maria III poem for some reason............

why...

i dont really know why......i have no idea...maybe i took a little more time in that one...cause this one was like 15 minutes or 30 at least...yeah.........

Good poem and I like the positive vibe thanks for the comment!

take care

Really original poem/. you tell a good story xx