wHoA
hah that was really good
Beautiful

Unloved ♥

This poem was completely awesome...i like your use of different words...not that many people on here to that..keep on writing.

ttyl,
Maddy

good poem keep up the good work.. crissie

Youre a great writer! keep up the good work! gr8 hun

It really needs work

Another simply perfect poem from you! I loved how you repeated the last line and also made it the title of your poem!