That's really good! Especially this part:

I throw out my hand for everyone to see,
But everyone just stands there to watch me drown,
Isn't it ironic to see how easy it is,
To kick a person when they are already down?

The last stanza is really good, too! great work!

i love that poem =). keep it up ,you rock at writing poems! =).

Great poem! I love it! Wonderful. So emotional. GREAT! 5/5 here for sure! If you ever need anything or someone to talk to i'm here. My email is Squishmaster1209@Yahoo.com.. Keep up the good work sweets. *hugs*

~Jessica

wow, I just love this poem. It's excellent, and you say you're still a beginner? that's got to be a lie. Anyways, I also recently began to write poems as well. And mine don't sound as good. But that's ok, because I have great inspiration from all you great writters. (tears falling) this poem is so emotional and touching. 5/5 great job, keep it up and take care.

this is nothing but short amazing .. it inspires me.. i loved this... great write beautiful write acctaully for a beginer you are one of the best ive read from so far.. 5/5 from me keep it up and stay strong ... sabrina

I love this poem..it means so much! It kinda relates to my life by the person judging me...Please write more.

i like this poem too! great job!

that is so good!! its long but it was worth the time! i loved reading it. xxx