great poem, keep it up. thanks for voting for mine.
much love, lilia

hi, this poem is wonderful. one of your best I think. it has a very good flow.
take care,
marjan
P.S. You're really talented. keep it up.

U strike agen!! i admire ur words and the power in them... i jus dunno wat the title has to do with these words of the poem.. i mean.. u cud call it last sigh, or add a staza or smth and include the last leaf.. but i understand ur title and wat u meant in the poem.. and it not necessary that ur title be included in ur poem.. i was jus thinkin..
anywayz.. that was amazing
keep it up

Wooooooowwwwwww, that's pretty deep, it's very emotional, and very good, i like your work very much, you keep it up too! ^_^

Hey partner...literally were partners..it was good..well ok it was fair not my style but yea it has potential and i think you can take it somewhere...i'd work on a better rhyme scheme..but that's jus me..keep em comin...you'll get better...anyway..check mine out so we can say we did this thing...aight..hit me back..peace

Hi again,
lovely!!!!!!!!! thats all i can say for this.

Incredible