I really like this poem. It's got a good flow and it's very descriptive. Well done.

Take care,
- CrimsonTears.

Beautifully written. Very heartfelt! 5/5

this is awesome i give it a 5 please check out some of my poems when you get a chance

Wow....I'm almost speechless! I love this, it's so sad yet passionate! I don't know what else to say, see "almost speechless"! I'll just say magnificent piece~Holly

awesome job! beautifully written

wow thats awesome, its got a really good flow 5/5

nice...it is a good flow....