your on the right track very very god poem. wise words from so one so young, very very good:)

awesome poem! love the third and fourth stanzas.. especially the word choice in the third...
great work and 5/5
-Erica

This is a really goo dpoem. I like how you played with words and I see your point of view clearly. Keep on writing!

nother great poem!!!

once again, great work. i love the rhyme sceem..it really works out. I really love your work..its terrific! keep it up

i love this one, it means sooo much to me, i move a lot so this is a really good one to me!