That was a wonderful poem, which you have amazingly weaved into a story. It truly touched my heart, if I had any more tears left, I would had cried my heart out. I must say again, that poem was splendid. Bravo! Bravo!

Thank you everyone. xxx

Touching..I love it.

Rachel Morgan

Touching..I love it.

Rachel Morgan

Awsome poem! very emotional.

Thank you everyone. xxxx

that is the best poem i have ever read in my life...great pt of view 5/5

Wow, that was one of the best poems I have ever read! I loved the way it rhymed and the way you wrote it. Is this true? Wow, it really touched me. I had tears in my eyes the whole time. You are a great writer. I look forward to reading your future work. Excellente poem. 5/5. Keep your head up. Peace.

this is an excellent poem i really enjoyed reading it - good job

Thank you so much everyone. It is a true story. xxx

:'( aw. that one made me cry...soooo sad, but very good!

verry good keep up the good work it made me cry xsamx

Thanks! xxx

wow....im like...speachless defentily the best poem I have E V E R read..wow lol the rhyming and how it all went into place was amazing! you have to have alot of talent to do this and how you came up with it all...WOW!! great job!

thanks

very nice

this is beautiful. you made me cry. i knwo exactly how you feel... my friend has cancer and it really touched my heart. this is really awesome. i love your poem.

This is the gr8test poem iv red in my intire life and sry for the lost hope that the poem makes you feel better.

thanks! xxx

very touching poem. very long... but well worth the time.