Oh my gosh, that was very long but worth it, I took my time and read it and I thought it was remarkable, I think that was one of the best poems I've ever read definately it deserves a 5/5, keep up the good work but with your talent you most definately won't need my wishings,

<33 Jess

What a beautiful story! You have quite an imagination very well thought out! Thanks for the nice comment you left me that was sweet! You see I can't write a longer poem I lose my thoughts! Good work! I enjoyed reading this poem! Take Care! Brooke~

Very very good and well written, i like the description, keep it up :)

take care
Sara

Yeah I got the idea from it, changed it a bit, to make words rhyme, and added some stuff.

awesome poem, whos the video by? gawd that made me cry...

Well Worth The Read! Way To Go 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo