I loved it. you expressed your feelings sooooo wonderfully. I can relate to
it cuz I lost my great Gramma 5 years ago and I miss her sooo much too.
much love, Marjan

nice work. again, sorry for your loss.

Hey
sorry to hear about your lose.But its a great poem your a brill poet keep it up

aww...that was so sad! It was really good though, I felt alot of emotion though it all...I really liked it!!!

the poem was very sad but also very good.. sorry for your loss.. if there is ne thing i could do just holler.. the poem was good.. keep writting!! bye bye EJ

very sad poem! 5