hey....although it doesnt flow exactly, it has so much meaning..which makes the poem so good! thanx for the comment on my poem! u have skill! luv monique

You have to love yourself first. This poem has so many different emotions in it. It is written from the heart which makes a good poem. It could use a little work but it came from the heart and that makes it more meaningful. Keep it up! I give you a 5/5 for showing true feelings! Take Care! Brooke~

Very nice!!!