You had a good idea. I thought it was original and I also think it makes sense. Good job!
Check out some of mine when you have time thx.
Keep it up*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

it was a great idea...i would have never thought of it and its so interesting and people can relate to it...its great keep up the different ideas ....5/5

Thats really trippy, very interesting idea....... nice point of view... lol
*Keep smiling*
katy

this was very great
i loved it please keep writing your very good
and we know what you mean...

THAT A RELI GOOD IDEA and i does make sense. your well good keep it up :P plz comment and vote on some of mine x

Very original, i made sense... brilliant... and it makes me think too... hmmmmmm

its such a different idea... i loved it!

very good and original. it makes senses, i loved how you used fairy tales. keep up the good work. plz comment and rate on some of mine.
~ApRiL

LOVE THIS POEMS. it does make sense and it makes you wonder if there really is anything such as a happy ending.

DeathsLittleHelper

That was an awesome poem. Suddenly fairy tales make sense. Keep up the good work
Katelyn x x x
kitty_mwa@hotmail.com

Hey gurl sorry i havent been on lately. i really love reading your work.sorry if i hyavent been in toch much.do u have myspace?we should just chat one day that would kewl.well i g2g2 but let me u ur still there.
love bunches
jay

Hey u said it was a good idea at the time. i fink dat it still is.its really good. i like the way u twisted the fairytales. thanx 4 ur comment on mi poem it means alot
keep strong mel

Hey u said it was a good idea at the time. i fink dat it still is.its really good. i like the way u twisted the fairytales. thanx 4 ur comment on mi poem it means alot
keep strong mel

Hey ive read a few of ur poems and they are really good.

xxxx
..::Broken Lullaby::..