Truly well done. In some ways, I know how you feel.

I loved this one. You're really talented.
take care, Marjan

I liked the way you wrote it.
really great.
love you,
marjan

wow, this is really creative and original! i love the questions at the beginning of each part!! awesome job!! 5/5
love always,
abcede

Well, i love the meaning behind it...but see..ur rhyming was a little jumpy. you would have good rhyming..and then you would lose it..so meh...

Strong emotions. And I liked the style, it was very different. Valid questions, I'm sorry you had to go through that. Twas well written, and had voice. Good job. 5/5.

~rolo

Great job. I'm gonna read some more of yours cause this one was pretty good. kilman = David B.

I love this last line "Inner scars never heal." .It's so ture .. your a really great writter keep it up . I like reading your poems
April

5/5

nice job! i used to get bullied alot when i was younger, but it stopped after i hit a kid in the face :0) good poem! keep writing!
luv ya,
Ashli

I can relate to this one even more than the others as I experience this as well, the poem is brilliant, sorry you had to go through it, well done, well written with good structure and flow, keep it up

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Again....great emotion. thanks for the opportunity for me to read these words. I love your form of writing and the way that you incorporate your feelings into poems. Keep it up.

~*~Chrsitina~*~

I loved the way you wrote this poem.
really beautifully. you're really talented.
much love,
marjan

GREAT idea. I LOVE this poem (and I rarley say that). Dont think I have seen this Idea used before. Dunno about the last line. Its good but it does not tie in with the end to the other stanzas. But would say leave it unless you can find something better. X