great poem & very well written. I enjoyed reading it. it has a good
flow. take care, Marjan

Hey I like your pome and all the feelings that are in it, the only thing i would say it is a little repetative... just what i think... 6.03 on the Ronin 6.66 scale

Great poem! I really liked it! It flowed nicely so i gave it a 5

Long but nice amount of detail. My favorite stanza was the last one! I know a lot of people have those feelings sometime in their lives. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

I was just going to return the favour, as you commented on one of mineand i was amazed how good a poet you were, this poem is awesome! 5/5 mate and thanks for your comment.
wow.
love Tara-Kay

GREAT POEM