oh hun :( such a sad poem... We'll get there hun... i know its hard to believe atm, but we will... absolutely amazing poem... shame that these night terrors occur... we'll get there :-) I Love You Hun!! xxxxxxx SO much!!! xxx

wow tht was so good and it wasnt a tipacal depression poem you see on the site....it was unigue....great job!

thanku all :-) x

oh girl, I'm so sorry you have those....this poem is amazing. I especially love the 2nd to last stanza. Great job. <3

This is a really awesome poem you are very talented. Keep it up 5/5
much luv
~nikki~

This poem is great, you expressed yourself really well 5/5

thanku all so so much x

=( That's SO beautiful Toni. So descriptive but so painful..I wish you weren't hurting like this..I love yoo..I'm here for you when you need me, whenever you need me. Things will be alright one day Toni, I promise.
I love you hun, I really do.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Bumfluff.

excellent, amazing poem hun, always here sis!
xxx

WOW! the title is what caught my attention for this one, i'm glad i read it too! you did an excellent job writing this peice. i hope things clear up for you.

~PLP~ lil slam~

Another grabbing poem. My lungs were shriveling from breathlessness, lol. I've started to write a story called Silver Tears, and I was wondering if I could use this. of course I'd dedicate it to you, lol. But everything you said was so relevant, it was uncanny. Stay wonderful!!!!

xoxoSierra

I'm doing fantastic, Toni. Time away from all of the drama on this site, although I did miss everyone, it gave me time to recooperate. And I feel so much stronger.....annnd.....:-D.....I fell in love last night with THE sweetest guy on earth and omg...lol. I loved him a while, I just got it off my chest last night. It was truly adorable, the things we told each other, lol! But I've never been happier.

LOL! Oliver's grammar reminded me of a robot, like how everyword was spelled out, there were no words like don't, can't, could've (I forget what they're called), but it just made me laugh, lol.

I really hope you don't need to go to the hospital. You don't belong in a place like that, Toni. And what would they do for you? Personally, I think this is something you need to recover on your own, but if it's serious, then I guess that help couldn't hurt, right? Anyway, I'm sorry if I got in your business, it wasn't my place, I know. Please get back to me soon!! I hope you get this, too, lol.

~Sierra

great poem. please comment on my poem "I"

outstanding poem as always hun. such a sad message.hope you'll be alrite soon so much, keep looking up, lu -x-x-x-