The thought was good. The rhyme was decent. The flow could have been a little better. You should break the lines into stanzas, it would help with flow and meter. Other than that, it was a pretty good poem.

Aww this was really sweet. i liked it alot.. good form. i liked it. Keep it up!

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

Beautifully written! Such a sweet dedication! You can feel the love you have from your heart as you read! Take Care! Brooke~

I liked it.. very sweet and emotional.. your a good writer.. thanks for commenting on my poem.. i'll try and read some of your others and comment on them to.. hope you will do the same thanks.. bye bye EJ

I like it

this is sooo brilliant. You write so wonderfully. take care,
Marjan

aw, this ones cute, well done

Excellent job. xxx

oo nice poem greg wat a funni name lol anyways 5/5

Nice Poem! I Loved It! It's nice to know that there are still talented guys that aren't total buttholes out there. anyway 5/5!