Nice work, liked it very much.

One of the reasons of writing poems is that the readers should recognize themselves in the poem. An this is such a poem. Its like a read about myself. Good work!

Kinda crazy ending, made me giggle just a little! Hehe, I rhymed! 5/5 though! Great write!

" Why must i loose this friend,
Ive finished my cola,
So this is the end.." ??? The poem was great, but cola? :S im confused haha... anywayz great deal of passion love the lines, "The red color shining from you, expressing the naughtiness, lying inside of you. " Hehe great write!

Take Care,

Ana*