excellent! i love how you wrote this, especially the last line...very well put.

5.5

love and hugs

wow nice poem
i loved the last two lines in the 2nd stanza, they seemed to touch me and i felt alot of emotion in this poem

thanks for the comment

I know i say this alot but you're such an ausome poet... 10/10 can ya plz read ma poem tick tock stop and comment/vote....
ta muchkins hun....