Comments : Last words were "I hate you"

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    now this was sad but beautiful.
    Offten when a friend or loved one dies
    there are things said that we wish to take back. I lost my mother at a young age and " I hate you" was the last words from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    A few lines (particularly twards the end) seem a little forced. but all in all great poem... very powerfull.