wow powerful words uv got ther.
brill poem.
sam x

That is depressing. Im sorry. You seem to express yourself through poetry and thats good but make sure that poetry is your escape. Not cutting. I've learned that there are many ways. My escape is music and poetry. It really helps and I hope that is what your doing.

hey, nice job. it wouldn't let me comment on the other poem. anyway, i like your style, keep it up.

Although it's a somewhat cliched topic, this poem was very original. I absolutely loved it. However, and this is just my personal opinion, it might help the poem out a little by saying what made all this happen. Other than that, it was excellent. Groovy job.

liked ur poem
so depression but really awesome
keep this great work
and if u have the time plz read mines
xoxoxox

Great job! i feel like this alot of the time now,

check out my new poems rate and coment them, please. thanks :) i tried to make them longer.