Good writen...It does a good job taking you there.. 6.21 on the Ronin Scale

I think this might be my favorite so far. I know all about dreamland. I look forward to reading more of your work! Take Care! Brooke~

wow, I really enjoyed reading this one.
You describe everything so beautifully.
take care,
marjan

Very excellent poem! 5

The price of a dream.
great line, sets up perfectly the ending.

nice imagery keep it up chad

again u have stated what i try to state but i cant. great job. couldnt have said it better myself. but I'll try. lol.

Keep up the good work because this was yet another amazing poem. good job!

hmmm i like how your poems are all differnt

oooohhhh i really liked this one...maybe my favorite i dont know...too many to choose from...nice job 5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-