Cascade of love (revised)

by Sean   Jun 22, 2005


Time passing through sandy waters,
Ringing, thoughts entwine my brain,
A need for love, burrowed into my eyes.
Cascading waters trace each step I take,
Into every crevice I make on the sand,
Everything, like my loneliness, washed away.

Into a heaven, I take my steps.

Leaving, some form of ugliness behind,
Out away from pain, and hatred,
Veers into a million directions, like a burst of light
Everything, amounts to this loves path.

You, angel in my path,
Outmatching the beauty of sun, or rain.
Under your glow, I find my love.

Sleep together now,
Our beautiful time combined in each other.

Master, and angel,
Utilised in peace, heavens embrace,
Cascading, cascading we fall together,
Harmony, unmatched.

[Tracie, I love you so much]

(Really trying to make this one work, i\'ll delete the previous one if the general concencus is that this is a working and well done poem, if not then i\'ll do one more revision and just leave it...i find it hard to judge my work as i always find it shit.)

(Edit, missed out 'SO' in the downward sentence, now included)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    thats a lucky girl...wow you have A LOT of talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    Just realised i missed the 'SO' part..*edits*