that was good, could easily be turned into a song :D its really pretty :D

Absolutely beautiful! Sounds like you have found true love. I can't write love poems probably because I haven't had much luck. Anyways, very well written poem! Take Catre! Brooke~

Loved the poem.. u had a great rhyme scheme down! Awesome.. going to read more. Keep it up.

I can really relate to this poem. The rhyming was perfect, and it flowed so well. Your very talented. Keep it up. xX

awww such a sweet poem! i loved it. awesome job

It was a very refreshing poem on love, you made it your own unique thing, if you know what I mean.

:)

I loved the poem! It's so sweet! Great job!