omg...don't do it, please...it's not worth it...better things will come along...i love the poem, especially the style...great job!

hey, this one's very well written.
I liked it. keep it up.
much love,
Marjan

Although I'm not a great fan of obvious rhymes and common lines, this is pretty good. Dont dis yourself, you did a great job!

This I think is your best one that I have read so far. Very sad and once again showed emotion. Good work! ~Brooke~

great poem, something I can relate to 100 %, I really love this one.....Hope that you are ok??? very sad but well written....

*Hugs Sabrina*

very nice

This one is my favorite of yours. I don't understand and/or condone self harm but you did a very good job writing about it. Your suicide writings worry me a bit. I do hope all is well. I think this piece is perfect. It flowed very well and definitely got your message across. You surely let it be known that you were in pain and hurting very much! Another very nice write. :)

good job. not bad at all. and i like your icon.....is that a picture of ellie from degrassi??

awww that is sooo sad, i really like this poem, it is very powerful, i can feel the emotion!! keep it up

Lucy***

Great poem please keep writing and please be happy and write happy