First can I say I don't know what you were talking about when you said my poems might make you look bad...Girl this poem was AMAZING!! I mean it was better then my poems,.honestly I've never been more breathtaken reading a poem then this one made me,,I'm not sure what to say except I agree with you 150%! THis was amazing and I hope you get so much feedback!!
5 golden stars!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

in a word............WOW it was fantastic! it said everything that needs to be said....can you get it put up on a banner over the White House......you are a very good writer, and my feedback is WRIGHT MORE...........Great love ya Becky

wow...i really really like this poem. for a beginner your really good. keep it up! definitly 5/5!! thanks for comment on my poems.

Well Char, I do have to agree with everyone above me. This is truly an amazing poem. You have talent my friend, so keep on writing. Also, this poem is just so true and for someone so young as you to see how this world and the people in it are, why can't everyone else see it too and voice it like you have, then maybe something would get done. Wonderful job!!!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

i love it!!!!! please keep writing coz i love reading them! i think u have some of the best poems on this site! xxx luv steph

Are you sure you're a begginer? That's a great poem! 5/5!

WOW, Amazing poem!!!!!!!! Great job, I loved it, every part of it, great choice of words and reads smoothly. 5/5