It's a shame how many people on here have such sad things to write about. Your emotion comes through well, n i really hope this situation can get better.
5/5 - i liked it, well written.

keep it up
kt x

Hey its a really sad poem i feel the same n i know how you feel , 5/5 waiting for more from you i hope u comment on mine n vote if u can thannx *hugzz*

I don't know why you said that it's not that good, cuz it sounded very good to me:) I'm sorry that you have such problems with you father:( I hope things get better! Thx for you comment! Stay strong!!
Keep it up *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~