I thought is was SEXY... and quite weird that no one didn't know about it!! But who cares about that... it's hott of a poem:) Great Work.. -5/5-

*Sedusha*

dat was totally hot lol you should deff write more maybe one about like a concert

Hey becky.....thas a great one...a concert....maybe ill write 1 about a concert...kool...thaxz..

thas watz crazy about da poem.....dat noone knew.....lol......i luv dat!!!

Good poem.Jeff

thanxz chris......dont forget...call me..!!!!

Nice poem

Dat poem made me want....lolzz!!