Sara,

I am bottled up and choking inside.

I'm so sorry that you have been so badly treated, he is no gentlemen. He should have never spoken to you in such a manner no matter what. That is so cruel and cold, he is a heartless person and does not even think about the way that he can hurt so deeply other people's feelings.

Try to cheer up, you have friends near and I am here if you need to talk.

Stay strong! XOXOXO

Steve

Sara,

I say, let him wait. Don't call just make him sweat. He a fool. If he dosen't come begging for you back, the he's an idiot not just a fool.

Be strong and tough. I know what it feels like. I wanted to just crawl up and die. But somehow we will all pull through.

Lot's of love XOXOXO

Steve

Even though she broke your heart you still found it in your heart to want happiness for her. Only if there were more guys in the world like u. WOW.... thats a very well written poem. Its heartfelt and warming. I love your work. You are now one of my favorites bc u have a grt talent.

Love
Nana

Nicely written!!!

Your poems are so beautiful..
My favourite line:
"I could not believe that I was living this hell, this insanity."
I love anything with insanity in it...Haha..I admire your skills, I don't think I could make that rhyming scheme work for as long as you did.
Keep writing Beesley, you have much talent
~*Freak*~