Comments : Death of Another

  • 16 years ago

    by hayley williams

    Hey Jarrod, i love this poem, its brilliant, you are a gifted poet. Maybe you should stick to that and leave the hacking to me! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    woh that was awesome keep writing love to read more. luv heather

  • 16 years ago

    by Hayli

    wowzers. I love how it's so simple yet says alot. Never stop writing!

  • 13 years ago

    by beav

    So tragic. really nice. i felt the helplessness. good descriptions of the physical manifestations of emotions experienced. so much sadness and feeling in only a few lines. awesome piece. 5! -beav