lol i like the first line it sounds liek from a song from some artist i cant remember tho anwyas awosme poem keep it up 5/5

great poem. i never felt any of that in 5th grade. you really worded that very well.

i thought that it was really good
just keep writin and keep your head up

*plz comment/rate on mine

i thought that it was really good
just keep writin and keep your head up

*plz comment/rate on mine

i thought it was really cool and i would be honoured he ur read/commented/voted on some of ma poems... 5/5

amazing poem, beautifully written keep up the good work
-x- sam -x-

Aww this is so cute! but alittle sad..5/5

Wow, in 5th grade, early love huh, lol. Good slang rhymes, lol, and intresting :)

That poems is very good good job

ohh my gosh.this is so sad.poor you.this is so emotional and touching.gosh i'm crying.BRAVO!!!