That was awesome! You are an OUTSTANDING poet! I can't write free verse, I can only rhyme! So this was amazing for me, you really impressed me! You make my work look like crap! Keep writing, you have talent, lots of it! Can't wait to read more from you! 5/5

perfect...it reminds me of my life...awsome

Its ok.i mean i get the concept and what your trying to get through, i understand.you see people from elementary, then you see them in junior, an high school and their totally different people.well good poem ne ways

Us in black we do not change our selfs to fit in we are Proud Proud that we are not the same we are indervidual and no sneer or glear from the copycats will ever penatrate our hearts