I was working 18 hour days between my two jobs. I sleped my days away on my two days of.

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hello! i thought this was good, about life just passing on through almost like it's without you.....gave me kind of a lonely feeling but.....5/5 Take Care and Peace! //ari\\

p.s.-there was just one spelling mistake: plains=planes.

That was really good. It was like, it's own little styly, and I liked that. Good job

It was very short, not a certain structure, free verse i guess. It was okay, the rhyming was good. I think it would have been alot better if there were more lines. It had meaning. good job

Love Alwayz,
Katie Schettler

omg i love ur work! its soo amazing. i give you 5/5

again, very good poem...keep it up!