Untilted (maybe you could help me make one)
by Stephanie Jun 25, 2005
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I hear the gentle summer breeze in my ear it slowly dries my tears, I see the sky it puts my mind at some sort of ease because I now relize he is noting but a tease I see the ever changing moon which is in some ways like me and you I smell fresh clean grass which reminds me he is now my past I sink my feet in the dirt and try not to hurt I also try to smile because ill only be here for a little while... |
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18 years ago
Summer Breeze might be a good title, but my opinion, you have the final say, Take care- great job.
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18 years ago
by kiesha
Great job! I love your poem, it's really good. Maybe you could call it...A Little While. Good luck with finding a title! Keep writing and take care.
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18 years ago
by Stef
Summer Fling maybe? I'm not sure. But good poem.
<3 Stef
