A very cute love poem.
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Great rhythm / rhyme. It has a nice flow...you're off to a good start...keep writing. I wanna see what you can do. ;)

One thing though...I think it really is better if you write it all out, the "u" is easy to understand, but sometimes it can get confusing...and it's just nicer if you take the time to write it out...I do things like "gotta" though...just some stuff. lol. okay. i'm gonna shut up now.

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UR GOOD YES U R BOY IM CHATIN WITH U RIGHT NOW MWUAA LOVE BRIDGIE

wow very good cizus keep up the good job
I hate to feel jealousy

by the way this one deserves 5 out of 5