Excellent poem! 5

this was beautiful in every way, i loooooved the message, and each word flowed into the next like... i cant even explain i hope that i may become as great a a writer as you. I especially like this poem because its not your typical love poem i absolutley loved this you have great talent.
<3 always,
cate

another good poem, i love your style of writing..awesome job

I love this poem and I really like your style of writing

astonishing...thats the only word i can find for such an *astonishing* poem=)

:( that seriously made me cry.. i mean i am really over emotional right now because of a guy... but still. this poem just mademe cry.. and realize that there is a better day.. and even though i cant quite understand it , i can still stand up , even when i feel like i should be dead... i can make it through another day.. yet right now no one is standing with me yet... exept for god.. and even he, hasnt helped to dry the tears from my eyes. i love this poem.. its amazing.. keep it up