Very touching. Excellent job! Keep it up and check my poems out too!! Good job, again.

Rachel

Oh my god! seriously.. i just want to cry so much, it's so sad... excellently written, I've got goose bumps n everything.
You've an amazing writer..
5/5

its long, but well worth reading!

katie

hey, wow good job.

that’s a really sad poem...
very touching.

its really heartbreaking with what happened. 9/1.
something we cant really forget with all the pain and suffering from losing loved ones....

take care

-xXlostXx

9/11.

[sorry missed a one]

geez mate dat was soooooooo good.i loved it.it doenst mata dat it was long coz it was riten so wel and wsnt dragd on.lovd it
comment sum of my poems if u hav time
xoxooxox

ok i haev goose bumps and im like about to cry very touching your a good writer

☼Becky☼

Wow this is a really awesome poem it sent chills up my spine good write you are very talented. Keep it up 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

hey this is a wonderful poem! it's really sad and really shows the heartache of a family who lost a love one on that day. you might want to check out my poem called "First and Last" sorry but it's long but i truely think you will have some intrest in it. it would be nice to know what you think too.

~PLP~ lil slam~ wonderful poem~