It's a really good poem ^_^

heya..

good start!
check out my you are like a rose...same idea!

love ya xxx

good write. I like the rhyming scheme. can't wait to finish reading the rest of it...

a really good start. once its finished it'll be even more amazing. 5/5. short n sweet x

good so far! can't wait to read the rest!

Obviously unfinished, but with alot of potential...These four lines, alone, made me want to read the rest, whenever you finish it..

let me know

peace

Oh that has so much potential ....that could be turned into a great piece. FINISH it Kim!!! LoL .....I loved it! I'll be looking for the finished product! So get on it!! ;)

I really like what you have so far. I love how you explain that the thorns aren't there to intentionally hurt. I hope you finish it soon. Keep up the good work and take care.
><> Kiesha