its confusing stick to one format n a few grammar mistakes here n there love ya bunches

o, i love it!!! this is great, i can so relate. Gar, this makes me want to go find my guy and read him this poem, lol
~selina

excellent poem hun, it really stands out. xxx

This was just beautiful!! I LOVED IT! Good rhyming. Thanks for all the comments on mine. I added you to my favorites too.

OMG..you are an awesome poet. that is a very good poem too..5/5..you like explain exactly how i feel for my b/f..if you want to chat i would love to. Check out my poems plz and tell me what you think because you are great at writing...Thankx

So cute. But sad. :( Your an awesome writer!

15 years of live is lived...

live should be life...

hmm...the rhyme sequence was a bit off...the syllables of each and every other line were off and made it hard to read it in a solid flow...some of the line were a bit hard to understand as well.