Comments : Guardian Angel

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    Aw, this was very sweet and full of emotion. I like your word choice and the style written in. Thank you so much for all of your comments...and I promise I'll read all of your poems...but not right now. I'm leaving for about a week, whenever I get back I shall. Take care.

    ~rolo

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    I love that first part of the last stanza...the rythm was great. Them message was even greater.

    Take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Great message in this poem! We all need a guardian angel. I know there have been times when I needed one. I know someone is looking after me I am still here and with all I have done in the past that's amazing. Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Simply exquisite, speaks directly to my heart in a very great way...Thank you for sharing it with me...truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    This was another excellent poem! 5 This one flowed nicely and i can totally relate to this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    cool

  • Seriously, all of your poems are just so amazing! They are really full of emotion and really inspirational, and that makes you really a great writer. I love all of your work that I've read so far, so continue writing and I'll be sure to check them out ;). Another 5/5 btw. ^^

    -Anth

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    cool...i have a poem with that same title

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Very nice. It seems for once on this website is actually positive! *aplaud* very nice rythm.

    xoxo
    Jen
    we need to talk more lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Your friends must be priceless. Either that or you're an even better friend for writing poems of appreciation. Shows how much they mean to you, and that you care. I love it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This was so beautifully written. I loved this poem. Like I said, your a great writer. Never give up on this, you have so much potential! xX Stay Strong Xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Tears Of The Soul

    Beautiful (no surprise there) very orginal (well.. to me it is) and very powerful, why did my Guardian angel pick someone like me? aw well, another question for another day. I hope you keep up the great work, you wonderful person you! *AHH! Why can't I use the praise button! Dear God in heaven why! ARGH!!!!*... ^_^x

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Not your best work, i don't know what it is about it...something about the presentation and the catagory that it was under made me sorta "meh" about it. I am by no means saying it is a bad poem. perhaps i am just confused on what the guardian angel is suppose to be. i think that it has great potential but i feel like i am left hanging or something....i still give it a five because i think i might be just tired, wonderfully done.

  • 18 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    beautiful work. so much emotion, very touching. keep it up:) xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    aww. this is so sweet and full of emotion.. almost made me cry.. amazing how ur words carry such emotion and a message straight to the heart.. no rhyme, but it sure has its own music
    keep up the love

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    I really liked this poem.

    It got me thinking..