Your work is good too, and I like this poem. Also I have written poem the way the some of the yongsters use the chat.

amazing.. i loved it so much you have talent..keep it up

take care
much love
shannon

Aww..
Tis very good.
I wish that I could write like you.
Or even leave slightly decent comments..

Aww..
Tis very good.
I wish that I could write like you.
Or even leave slightly decent comments..