Promise Me

by Billi Vermillion   Jun 27, 2005


Could you promise me the world
could you promise me i won't hurt
could you promise me your love
could you promise me what we talk of

could you promise me your heart
could you promise me it from the start
could you promise me this
could you promise me your kiss

could you promise me a realationship
could you promise me friendship
could you promise me happiness
could you promise me this

can you promise me all this
can you promise me all that
its what i want
its what i need

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  • 18 years ago

    by selina

    it was ok..... i just think you took the whole promising thing too far, it didn't flow enough but the "rhyming" scheme was good

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    aw i love it hehe i know who its about i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by rachel crawford

    Hey wow billi jean this is freakin awesome i understand it to i know how u feel i am amazed by it really good! Well ttul ok ok bye bye luvs u lots!

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