Comments : Goodbyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I love your poems! OMG!!! I don't have that many that I really like...I've been trying to mix up my techniques, like, with stanzas and all...any suggestions?

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Awwww....this is such an awesome poem! It's really well writin! LUVZ IT! Keep up da awesome work! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by twigchick

    that was one of the best poams i have seen for a friend!!!!!!!!!it really touched me bcuz i feel the same way right now as you did qwhen you wrote that poam.aswome poam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow I just noticed you're only 14 you have been blessed with the power to write! Another well written poem! I really enjoy your work~ Brooke

  • aww that was sweet too! i liked it, it was very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    One word: Amazing. <3 5/5 Keep it up! awesome poem. <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    Rhythm not so great on this one, but it's still good. 4/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    aww this is sad :( hope everythings ok now
    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by afrodite

    I love this poem, i remember how i fel when i left school and it brings back memories, its a great poem, keep up the good work chicken!